Tuesday, April 3, 2012

The Beautiful mistake


Little girl was standing behind the iron gates, watching kids play on the streets. Sun-rays made her hair shine like spun gold, honey-brown eyes complementing her pale skin. All this beauty dripping from her mocked the fate. If only she had aged normally she would have been a teenage-queen now. How could God make such a beautiful mistake? 

Dedicated to my neighbor’s daughter who is frozen in time.
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9 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 5, 2012 at 2:57 AM

    It was a well worded story! Picturesque, I must say. It drew pictures in my head! :)

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    1. LionessApril 5, 2012 at 10:16 AM

      Thanks Akriti, I'm glad I could paint in your mind :)

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  2. GayathriApril 9, 2012 at 10:57 AM

    The moment I saw your comment on my blog I was wondering how I missed your blog then I realized its never too late! :) Go to my blog take the award and put it up here! You deserve it.. :)

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  3. PratibhaApril 10, 2012 at 1:32 PM

    Such sadness trapped here.. heart breaking almost .


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  4. BikramApril 20, 2012 at 11:52 PM

    sometimes god can be so cruel ...

    Bikram's

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  5. UnknownMay 3, 2012 at 3:50 PM

    hello Mam,
    it may not be a surprize 4 u but plz check - http://vineetnagchemicals.blogspot.com/2012/05/versatile-blogger.html

    cheers !!

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  6. SaherMay 3, 2012 at 4:58 PM

    thoughtful piece! first time on your blog, looks interesting ! keep blogging :)

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  7. PriyaMay 7, 2012 at 12:42 PM

    Way to go lioness,I loved the way you framed the words,keep it coming!

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