I feel this is incomplete, so is the reason for the title. I will complete it someday...
On beloved!
How do I love you
What I feel is true
Let me walk you through
My life had the easy move
Till I see you shining like dew
Everything changed in moments less than few
I’ve this wish new
Forever with you to live
So romantic and cute, you have an awesome honesty, which you combine with a great ability to put into words. Can sense emotions behind each word you utter. It's a great thing to have and reflects how humane you are.
ReplyDeleteNo wrong in being confused. All great minds are like that.
Power to you.
Arif
this may help you to finish
ReplyDeleteonce I thought it would be good chance
for the further in the life to enhance
its not always I think I am right,
but this time, I didnt like to fight
just thinking that you would change
for a while, had given my life although its strange.
:)
Arif, thanks for beautiful comment. You always praise me just too much :)
ReplyDeleteHarsha, that was a nice extension :)
ReplyDeleteI'd the idea of the complete poem, but after here it was not good. So I left it till the time I get some good ending.